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Localization of Te wo Nigitte Arukitai.
Adapted from translated lyrics by peachygirldb.
Let's hold hands today, walking down a new road
Got a funny feeling, that fun days are on their way.
Let's hold hands today, take an oath with me? Sunshine
Days so full of seeking, Go! My way
I accidentally woke up too early today
Wonderful weather from morning on
Made sure to check my fortune and what does it say; today it's all luck for me
Let's not overdo it, but head on our way
At just the speed we wanna go
But you know, our whole lives start today-ay
Let's hold hands today, walking down a new road
We'll be seeing mountains, and some valleys on our way
Let's hold hands today, crossing over them all, hey youth!
Days so full of meaning, Go! My way
Lately my whole family has been on my mind
From the bottom of my heart
Isn't it amazing how they've cared for me
For my entire life
I can't say for certain, what the future holds
But since I don't that gives me
A chance to dream, great things on the wa-ay
Let's hold hands today, walking down a new road
Got a funny feeling, that fun days are on their way.
Let's hold hands today, take an oath with me? Sunshine
Days so full of seeking, Go! My way
I love all of you, you wonderful people
You wonderful family, you wonderful bro and sis
Thank you one and all, for the wonderful memories
Everybody I've met, I thank you all
Let's hold hands today, walking down a new road
We'll be seeing mountains, and some valleys on our way
Let's hold hands today, crossing over them all, hey youth!
Days so full of meaning, Go! My way
Let's hold hands today, walking down a new road
Got a funny feeling, that fun days are on their way.
Let's hold hands today, take an oath with me? Sunshine
Days so full of seeking, Go! My way
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NOTES
Originally started the song with "Let's go holding hands" as it fit syllable-wise, but changed it to "Let's hold hands today". Flows much more like the original.
Originally turned "walk down the street" into "walking down the pathway", but then changed to "walking down a new road". Sounds more like the Japanese line, and "new" fits in the song.
Originally turned "cross over them" to "crossing what blocks our way", but changed it to "crossing over them all". Sounds a bit smoother, and things blocking the way seemed more than what the original was going for.
Scales as the source of the fortune got omitted. It wasn't something I was familiar enough to work with, and in that case the slightly more general version would be easier to grasp for others like me anyway.
The bit with the letters (E, C) I ignored--other than holding up these letters in the Goto Maki video it just seems like so many other times when a word or syllable gets repeated.
Added wordplay: "funny feeling that fun days are on their way", "been on my mind from the bottom of my heart"
Replaced "siblings" with "bro and sis" both for reasons of length and sounding more casual.
"Days full of adventure" and "Days full of importance" still sound way clunkier than the original. They maintain the right length and meaning, but are the part I'm currently least happy with.
"Days full of importance" became "Days so full of meaning"
Adventure -> seeking? exploring? Derring-doing? roaming? seeing?
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Originaler draft, mostly concerned with getting a proper syllable count.
Let's go holding hands, walking down the pathway
Got a funny feeling, that fun days are on their way.
Let's go holding hands, take an oath with me? Sunshine
Days full of adventure, Go! My way
I accidentally woke up too early today
Wonderful weather from morning on
Made sure to check my fortune and what does it say; today it's all luck for me
Let's not overdo it, but head on our way
At just the speed we wanna go
But you know, our whole lives start today-ay
Let's go holding hands, walking down the pathway
We'll be seeing mountains, and some valleys in our way
Let's go holding hands, crossing what blocks our way, hey youth!
Days full of importance, Go! My way
Lately my whole family has been on my mind
From the bottom of my heart (Heart)
Isn't it amazing how they've cared for me
For my entire life
I can't say for certain, what the future holds
But since I don't that gives me
A chance to dream, great things on the wa-ay
Let's go holding hands, walking down the pathway
Got a funny feeling, that fun days are on their way.
Let's go holding hands, take an oath with me? Sunshine
Days full of adventure, Go! My way
I love all of you, you wonderful people
You wonderful family, you wonderful bro and sis
Thank you one and all, for the wonderful memories
Everybody I've met, I thank you all
Let's go holding hands, walking down the pathway
We'll be seeing mountains, and some valleys on our way
Let's go holding hands, crossing over them all, hey youth!
Days full of importance, Go! My way
Let's go holding hands, walking down the pathway
Got a funny feeling, that fun days are on their way.
Let's go holding hands, take an oath with me? Sunshine
Days full of adventure, Go! My way